a. Write your first piece for a mature audience (define), using a style that reflects your key purpose
Sydney Fringe is Sydney’s independent festival from September 6 to September 29.
The Sydney Fringe pops up in venues all over Sydney, including Leichhardt, Parramatta, Oxford Street and the City. This is a very popular activity that can bring you a great experience for the visual and performing arts. This festival gathered many people from different jobs and different ages. All of them show their special aesthetical of arts. You might think this is really a great festival can make you Vitality Toughness. Come and enjoy this visual experience.
b. Then write it again, but now directed towards a younger audience (define).
A very fashion and popular festival Sydney Fringe festival will be hold on September 6 to September. Fringe Central covers the Inner West, Inner East and CBD and includes the Newtown/Marrickville/Enmore area, which boasts the highest concentration of independent theatres and live performance spaces in Sydney and the largest artist population in Australia. This might has a strong attraction on young people. You will enjoy a visual and performing arts. You can also show your own special types of dressing. This is really a popular festival especially for young guys. So just come to enjoy.
This is from eJournal in March. The tutor ask us to write two paragraph that have same information but the target population are different. The purpose of this task is let your words in the information product suitable for target population. This is a useful practice, because if your words are not suitable for the target population, they may not read it. In this way, the suitable words and are a essential element in an information product.